After looking over my drafts, I decided some changes had to be made.
After reviewing my cover, I decided there was too much space, so I moved the barcode to the bottom right corner and added another cover line.
The contents page looked too structured and predictable, so I decided to move the images around, cropping out the background from one of the images. I also removed the strip and made the entire contents have the graduated tint that was on the title strip.
The main issue with my initial double page spread was that the text wasn't legible (i.e the blue text on a green background), so I decided to duplicate the background layer and put a layer with a lower opacity (around 50%) and erased the initial background to make the quote and text from the article stand out more on the page.
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